We are two year 3/4 classes at Gilberthorpe School. This is a place where we can share our learning with you. We also have our own blogs which are linked off the right hand side of the page. Please note that some of this work will be our first draft, so there may be some errors. We would love to see your comments, feedback, thoughts and ideas!
Kia ora, your blog post Manawaroa is amazing because it looks like you have worked hard and tried your best. We think to make this better, you could add a background and also more detail on the person. How long did it take you to make this? Thanks. From Ngākaunui
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Kia ora, your blog post Manawaroa is amazing because it looks like you have worked hard and tried your best. We think to make this better, you could add a background and also more detail on the person. How long did it take you to make this?
ReplyDeleteThanks. From Ngākaunui